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Business Email Dojo: Draft, Revise, and Bank Reusable Wording in 30 Days
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The Business Email Dojo template shows a first-year professional how to write a business email fast, with subject lines, openings, and closings ready for the four situations that come up most. The whiteboard holds a 5W1H diagram (What, Why, Who, When, Where, How) for settling the ask, four steps from draft to send, a table of subject lines and openings by situation, a check on recipients and attachments, and a growing bank of wording and feedback. The task board runs five columns, from Drafting through Applying a format, Revising and checking, and Sent to Template bank, and starts with five parent tasks not yet begun - taking stock, building formats, checking before you send, following up, and banking what worked. After thirty days you never start from a blank page, and the email that ate thirty minutes goes out in five - paste a banked line, adjust, send.
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Business Email Dojo
How to use: 1. Settle the 5W1H 2. Paste the format for the situation 3. Read it aloud and cut 4. Point at names and attachments
1. Settle the Request Before You Write (5W1H)
- The email you owe today
- What A PDF of the quote, sent back as a reply
- Why To attach to the Sep 1 internal filing
- Who Alex Rivera, Sales at Northwind (manager on Cc)
- When By 5 p.m. on Friday, August 28
- Where As a reply on this same thread
- How One PDF file. Do not ask for it over the phone
2. Four Steps From Draft to Send (paste, write, cut, send)
- 1. Paste the format Copy the subject and opening that fit the situation from the table in section 3. Never start from a blank page.
- 2. Write it in 3 lines Turn the 5W1H from section 1 into three lines - context, the ask, the deadline. One request per email, no more.
- 3. Read it aloud Keep sentences under 20 words and no more than two commas. Cut filler like just checking, quickly, and ASAP.
- 4. Point and send Point at the recipients in section 4 and the attachment in section 6, then send. Add one line that worked to section 7.
3. Subject Lines and Openings by Situation (copy them as they are)
| Subject line | Opening | Body and closing | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Request (external) | Request - quote for Project Atlas (by Aug 28) The ask and the deadline should be clear from the subject alone | Dear Ms. Rivera, I hope this finds you well. I am (name) at (company). Note - give your company name the first time you write | Add one line to the three from section 2, covering quantity and how it will be used Closing - Could you send it back by 5 p.m. on Friday, August 28? Thank you for your help. |
| Scheduling | Scheduling - kickoff meeting, Sep 1 to Sep 4 Put the date range in the subject so it can be judged before opening | Dear Ms. Rivera, Thank you for making time last week. Please take a look at the options below. | Offer three slots with the day and the time window. State the length and the place up front Closing - Could you pick one and let me know by Wednesday, August 26? |
| Apology and correction | Apology and correction - figures in the Aug 20 deck Make it clear from the subject line that this is a correction | I am sorry for the error in the material I sent on August 20. Put the apology on line one, ahead of any explanation | Order - what was wrong, what is correct, why it happened, what prevents it Attach the corrected file and always add one line asking them to discard the old one |
| Internal request | Request - check the figures for the Sep 1 filing (by Aug 28) Internally, lead the subject with the type of request | Hi Sam, (name) here, from (team). Internally, skip the pleasantries and go straight to the ask | Internally, drop the background and open with what you need Closing - Please confirm by 5 p.m. on Friday, August 28. |
4. Checking the Recipients (the 30 seconds before you send)
- To is the one person you are asking. Everyone else goes to Cc
- Use Bcc when the recipients do not know one another
- Match the greeting to the relationship. Dear on a first contact, Hi after that
5. Wording Traps (just three to remember)
- Softeners stack up. Cut I was just wondering if you could possibly
- Sorry belongs once, in an apology. Elsewhere use thank you for waiting
- ASAP is not a deadline. Give a date and a time instead
6. Attachments and File Names
- Attach first, then write. Say in the body that a file is attached
- Name files as 20260828_quote_company so they sort and search
- Over 3 MB, switch to a shared link instead of an attachment
7. Your Template Bank and Feedback Log (make it yours in 30 days)
- Where you are at day 30 Requests, thanks, scheduling, and apologies all go out in five minutes - paste, adjust, send.
- What earns a place in the bank 1. Wording that got a reply 2. Wording after a senior colleague fixed it 3. Wording you could reuse three times or more
- Situations with no format yet (build these next) - Thanks (after a visit, after a favor) - Saying no, or passing on something - The second and third follow-up
- Log (keep it, never delete) - Week 1 of August, 10 emails at 30 min each. Week 3, 12 min - Please confirm, rewritten as Could you confirm - Replies came back half a day sooner (measured in week 3)
Task board contents
Drafting 18 items
Take stock of email
You cannot build a format until you know where you stall. Start by counting a week of your own email.
Count weekly sends
Open your sent folder, count one week of messages and the minutes each one took, and write it in section 7.
Name 3 stall points
Write down three moments where you actually stopped typing - the opening, a refusal, a follow-up.
Copy 3 good emails
Pick three emails that were easy to read and copy them out, split into subject, opening, and closing.
Set subject and body
Stop thinking from zero every time. Build the shell for each situation first, then drop the request in.
Set 4 subject lines
Cover requests, thanks, scheduling, and apologies. Trace the subject column in section 3 and make your own.
Lock open and close
Lock one opening and closing each for a new contact, an ongoing contact, and internal mail.
Run a pre-send check
Almost every accident comes from the recipient line and the attachment. Run the same 30 seconds every time.
Point at every name
Read To, Cc, and Bcc from the top with your finger, greetings included, especially on a reply-all thread.
Check the attachment
To avoid writing attached with nothing attached, check three things - that it is there, what is in it, the file name.
Sleep on hard emails
Send refusals, pushback, and follow-ups the next morning after a reread (apologies go the day you notice).
Format the follow-up
Sending is not the end. Decide in advance how you ask again and how you apologize when it goes wrong.
State the deadline
So it does not get pushed down the pile, write when you need it as a date and a time, never as ASAP.
Word your nudge
Write one follow-up that opens with an apology for any crossed messages, and wait three business days.
Draft an apology
Follow the same order as the apology row in section 3, so no excuse can land before the apology does.
Bank your templates
The more wording you bank, the shorter each email gets. Add one every time you send, for 30 days.
Bank 5 that worked
Bank only wording that earned a reply from the other side (drafts you never sent do not count).
Log every correction
So you never take the same note twice, keep each fix as a pair - what you wrote and what it became.
